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Re: Pure of Heart ^_^
Yay! Thank you! Love you so much!! ^_^
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Our love will surely fly
that was freaking awesome! although, it made me want to cry, which is a good thing, I guess :wink:
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: My Inner Child Likes Chocolate
I thought this poem was cute, and I loved it! you don't need to change anything to it! :wink:
May 31, 2008 -
Re: May I Have This Dance
Hey, loved your poem! You don't need to change a thing! If you ever entered a contest for poetry, you should use this one. I found absolutely nothing wrong with ...
May 12, 2008 -
Re: Fallen Angels~Chapter 2
Thank you for the review, JW. And well, since their dad's a high level business man, he can afford seperate rooms for the kids. Maybe I should add that in ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Get over it my friend ch 1
I'm sorry, but I also have to mention the spelling errors. You should really fix those. That's about all I found. :wink: other than that, it was awesome!
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Magic of the Four Elements~prologue
don't worry; 4 dragons are going places: Cadmus, Suoh, Alima--Bakers City Kaida--Talbe And also, there are humans in the eggs, not dragons. sorry if it was too confusing. :) I'm ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Fallen Angels~Chapter 2
hey, thanx for the comments! nothin but praise so far... :elephant: YES!!! anywho, yes Fall_Into_The_Sky, he is a gangster, like the whole baggy pants underwear showing thing, and yes aestar101, ...
May 11, 2008